a sudden fall of silence so deep it cracks with the cold of it
the passing of an instant, in which the accepted procession of things spins on its heels, and the life that seemed to lead on moment through moment drops down, lies flat, and everything happens at once
the blue-lipped girl on the bathroom floor coughs, sits up, and propped on her arms, stares at the mottled legs stretched out in front of her
the dead cat curled on the chest of the dead woman arches back from its front paws, rocks its head back and begins licking its white fur bib, and the woman opens her eyes, reaches both hands up and around from her sides, and scritches the fur between its ears
the smashed man in the smashed van pushes himself back from the steering wheel and, finding his legs, steps out into the road, places his fists in the small of his back and leans in to a stretch as the motorway rushes past
the decayed man by the fence in the field rights himself into a kneeling position, then sits studying those hands in his lap like a man surprised at prayer, as the crows scrawk and fret high in the elms above him
the bloated man on the sofa rolls off sideways onto the floor and stops there, panting, all fours founded, the flat ribbed dog in the corner sneezing once and sitting up to watch him
the dead man in the pub toilet reaches a hand up to feel the wall, slaps the wall, shucks off a walking boot
the dead woman on the red cotton undersheet yawns, licks her cracked lips, pats the bedside table for teeth
the man under the tree in the park sits up and stares ahead at the shadows gliding noiselessly along the pavement
the bloody woman in the bath raises her head up from her chest, and begins to pick the wet strands from her face so she can watch the door
and transport arrives, figures of green and black
and Time through them all, leaning in with light fingers, unzipping the dead to the very atom, scattering what has gone, and passing on
and everything changes
and nothing does
24 comments:
Wow, that's powerful, what moving images you convey.
Thank you
Christine
Beautiful, real art from a real artist.
This is brilliant, Spence.
Christine, Anon & Ninjamedic - Thanks v much for the comments!
I was thinking lately that I wanted to experiment with different ways of putting some of these scenes across. I'm really pleased you like it! :)
yet again you leave me unable to come up with the words to express how moved I am by your writing. amazing stuff.
Helen
Thanks v much H - for your comments and support, and for coming back to visit the blog all this time! x
I wonder if you ever get sick of me and everyone else telling you what an amazing writer you are?........
No?
Okay then....
I finish reading and yet again, whilst in the dark office on station, in my recliner at 03:00 in the morning, say out loud for nobody to hear...
Wow!!!
Images
Arresting, thought-provoking, rhythmic, surprising.
I love
The poetry that plays in prose.
-Wren
Thanks Mark
No - it's always great to hear from you! (Although I'm sure people must think I just have loads of different aliases...) I'm really glad you liked this piece. I was a bit worried it wouldn't go down so well.
Hey Wren
Thanks v much for that. It is good to cut loose and write something even denser than usual, rather than the 'facts' of each case. Like I say, I do want to play around with the format a bit more. So thanks for the encouragement.
I have started another blog to experiment with stuff that's not so driven by the ambulance (pardon the pun). You'll find it on the profile section - not much there yet, but I'll try flipping between the two.
Hope you're well
SK x
Just excellent writing
Wooooooooooooow..... not a lot more I can say. Just Woooooooooooooooow!!
Thanks for being so lovely and encouraging, RRD & UHDD. :)
Simply great, Spence. So well done I had to link to my blog, hope you don't mind.
It's great to see some of my favorites who commented here share my sentiments!
Just brilliant Spence and I will never get fed up of saying that to you..xx
Wow, I feel the impact of your images.
Mike
Wow.... Awesome... NM said it: this is brilliant.
Wonderful stuff Spence.
Hey Mike!
Thanks for the name check! I owe you big time.
Rach, MW, WT, K - Thanks v much!
I was reading all your comments with a fairy cake in my hand (it's J's birthday - 5 years old - party tomorrow - excellent). Don't know which was more delicious! Rest assured if you were all here you'd all get a cake. (But as you're not, I might just have to have another one - in your honour...) xx
Guided here by Michael M.
I read this two ways... one, as zombies rising... two, as souls awakening.
Eerie, fascinating, engrossing.
Hope you don't mind if I come back.
Once again I stand in AWE!!
Thanks Jean - and yes, you'll always be more than welcome!
I always liked a painting by Stanley Spencer about the resurrection - loads of people rising from their graves in Cookham. It's a fantastic, epic piece of art (I think it's in the National Gallery). Thanks again for your comment.
Hey Gia!
Thanks v much!
Hope you're well and everything's good with you. x
What can I say that hasn't already been said by others?
Prophetic, poetic and profound!
I try and stay away from your blog, but I am a moth to your flame of genius.
Thankyou xx
Yes, I concur. Just powerful, beautiful, ghastly and so so moving Spence.
You rock .
Tanvi x
Hey Terri
Wow! Thanks! (Although I think I'm probably less like a flame of genius and more like a campinggaz cooker of aspiration...) x
Hi Tanvi
Thanks! 'Beautiful' and 'ghastly'. That reminds me of that poem by Auden where he talks about an 'expensive, delicate ship' - two adjectives that sit uneasily together, but say so much. x
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