tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27691111.post3647884273087851856..comments2023-07-18T07:27:08.516+00:00Comments on Siren Voices: falls dioramaSpence Kennedyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11183848895584919812noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27691111.post-40134023996341932102008-05-20T07:25:00.000+00:002008-05-20T07:25:00.000+00:00Thx v much DS & Cogi!I know what you mean about ov...Thx v much DS & Cogi!<BR/>I know what you mean about overdoing the dramatic ending. I think I need to get some kind of alerter on the laptop. Every time I'm tempted to tack on a sting, an alarm could sound (something like a raspberry).<BR/>;)<BR/>SSpence Kennedyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11183848895584919812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27691111.post-9907489841995022732008-05-20T01:52:00.000+00:002008-05-20T01:52:00.000+00:00Love that writing style ... particularly the kick ...Love that writing style ... particularly the kick in the pants at the end, (very effective as long as it's not overdone)...<BR/><BR/>But you really do have the knack of picking out the best and most effective parts to build up a description...cogidubnushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03542717738481600745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27691111.post-2434360262236701572008-05-18T17:59:00.000+00:002008-05-18T17:59:00.000+00:00Really enjoyed your description! Beautiful.Really enjoyed your description! Beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27691111.post-84359414246885232902008-05-17T13:42:00.000+00:002008-05-17T13:42:00.000+00:00You're welcome :o) I'm pleased the lady had someon...You're welcome :o) I'm pleased the lady had someone nearby who cares. It's a crying shame when people lose their ability to look after themselves merely because the body can't keep up with the brain. We have a lot of people like that at the care home - completely compos mentis but the old hips and knees have given in. They're always fun to talk to :D Some great stories.<BR/><BR/>Liv xxxloveinviennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08061067320547283159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27691111.post-24849292578755649062008-05-17T09:18:00.000+00:002008-05-17T09:18:00.000+00:00Thanks, LiV. She was ok - a little bruised where s...Thanks, LiV. <BR/>She was ok - a little bruised where she fell but nothing serious. Getting to the stage where she really needed to move into a residential home. I think she knew that, but had been hanging on for as long as possible in her own home (as we all would). I didn't mention the fantastic neighbour, which was a shame. She'd climbed over the back wall to get access in through the unlocked kitchen door. And then felt guilty that she hadn't heard her calling out sooner. <BR/>Thanks for all your encouragement<BR/>SxSpence Kennedyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11183848895584919812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27691111.post-11440317359549008002008-05-16T22:14:00.000+00:002008-05-16T22:14:00.000+00:00You have an utterly remarkable eye for detail. I a...You have an utterly remarkable eye for detail. I always see what you see and that is a sign of a good writer, in my eyes anyway. Enough with the compliments already? :o) I hope she was ok, the poor thing. Must have been terrifying for her.<BR/><BR/>Look after yourself Spence - continue turning the girls upside down :D (my Dad used to do that with me :D )<BR/>Liv xxxloveinviennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08061067320547283159noreply@blogger.com