Wednesday, September 21, 2011

only me

Veronica’s flat is round to the side. There is a discrete number to guide us there – a metal square held out on a bracket, picked out in white and black. An aggregate concrete path, where the breeze block wall on the right has broken down over the years, yielding to a steep drop and a scrub patch of garden. At the front of it, a circle has been cleared and flattened with black plastic sheeting, weighed down with gravel like dried peas on a pie crust ready for baking, a deckchair in the middle of it all, screened from the road by a wild and straggling buddleia.
Veronica opens the door after a few minutes of persistent knocking. She stands holding onto the handle, dreaming us.
‘Can we come in and have a chat?’ I ask her.
She considers the question, but at last the door seems to answer for her, shucking her hand away, releasing her to drift back into the gloom. We follow her inside - a cramped flat with just enough room in the hallway to make the turn you require: sitting room, bedroom, bathroom. Veronica has come to rest in the galley kitchen; she leans against the worktop with her arms folded.
‘My name’s Spence. This is Frank. We were told you may have taken an overdose. Of paracetamol. Is that right?’
She nods.
‘How much did you take, Veronica?’
But I can see for myself. Across the worktop is a scattering of torn pill envelopes, the large, soluble kind, and over in the sink, an empty bottle of vodka.
‘Did you take all these?’
She gives me a Stan Laurel look, a sad little thin-lipped, loose-necked waggle of achievement.
‘We need to take you down the hospital to get some treatment for this, Veronica. You’ve taken quite a bit.’
A shrug that almost puts her on the floor.
‘Let’s get your shoes and coat and things and head out to the ambulance, shall we?’
She shakes her head.
‘No. They don’t want me there. They can’t do nothing.’
‘Yes they can, Veronica. But one thing at a time. Let’s get your stuff together and go out to the ambulance. When did you take all these pills?’
‘I didn’t take enough.’
She starts to rip open another pack and I reach over and take it from her.
‘When did you take these, Veronica?’
‘Just now. An hour, maybe.’
‘OK. So the sooner we go the sooner we can get things started. All right? Let me get your bag for you.’
‘Don’t rush me. Okay? Just don’t – rush me.’
She pushes herself clear of the worktop and drifts downhill out of the kitchen and into the bedroom. When she bends over to grab a pair of shoes from under the bed it’s a miracle of gravity that she keeps her feet.
‘Easy there, Veronica,’ says Frank. ‘Here’s your phone, look.’
‘Thanks. Thank you.’
We help her sit on the bed. Suddenly she looks absolutely defeated. She points to a flowery brass frame with a sepia photo of a smiling young girl.
‘Tha’s my mum, that is,’ she says. ‘She died at Christmas.’
‘I’m sorry to hear that.’
‘I miss her.’
‘I bet you do.’
‘And my dad’s just gone in to a home.’
‘You’ve obviously had a tough time of it, recently.’
‘What?’
‘It sounds like you’ve had a lot to deal with. A lot on your plate.’
‘I have. I have had a lot on my plate.’
She bends forward to pull on a shoe, but we prop her up again.
‘Let me get that for you,’ says Frank. ‘I used to work in a shoe shop. There. Try that on. We sell a lot of those.’
Veronica shakes her head.
‘Don’t worry about me,’ she says. ‘I know you’ve got a lot better things to be doing.’
‘Nope. You’re our patient now. That’s all we’re worried about. There. Let’s get you up and out to the ambulance.’
But she stays sitting.
‘I’ve got two brothers,’ she says. ‘One younger, one older, both equally useless. Do you know what? Not one of them will change one little thing about their lives to help. They haven’t even been to see Dad yet and he’s been there a month.’
‘That’s no good,’ I say. ‘They’ve got to do their share.’
Veronica shakes her head.
‘It’s just me,’ she says, smacking her lips drily. ‘Only me.’
She puts her hands down flat either side of her and closes her eyes. The room ticks quietly. A sudden void of silence opens up around her, and even though the double bed almost completely fills the space, the walls of the little bedroom fly out, and the floor and ceiling spin away, and the bed drops into a great black pit of nothing, with Veronica the centre of nothing, a breath at the vanishing centre.
We prod her awake.
‘Come on Veronica,’ says Frank. ‘Let’s go.’
‘Make sure you pull the handle up before you turn the lock,’ she says.

11 comments:

Mike said...

That was a depressing one Spence. Poor woman.

jacksofbuxton said...

Families Spence.There's always one that takes the full burden,whilst everyone else leaves them to it.No wonder poor Veronica is feeling the strain.

Hopefully this should shame the rest of them into getting off their lazy arses.

Spence said...

Hi Mike. Yeah - she was in a bad way. But her next door neighbour was obviously concerned and offered help when we were walking out, so there are positive signs there.

JoB - Families, eh? Still - it's where the action is.

I hope her lazy so n'so brothers treat this as the wake up call it obviously is.

:/

Nari said...

I've truly missed reading your posts. Ive been away, dealing with a loss of my own but I'm trying to get back in the swing of things.

Though a sad story, the way you write, the words you use, always inspire me to write better.

Spence said...

Nari - I'm so very sorry to hear about your loss. An absolutely dreadful thing to have happened. I hope you're getting all the love and help you need to make it through this. With lots of love from me too, SK.

Anonymous said...

Poor love, I do hope she survives and gets the help she needs.
best wishes
lollipop
xx

Spence said...

Thanks, Lollipop. Me too.

papertigger1 said...

It seems like the ease of finding Veronica's flat was in very stark contrast to the vagueness you found when you got there. And you say "She stands holding onto the handle, dreaming us" but I know for certain she couldn't have dreamt Frank. He is such a jumble of talents (shoe salesman?) and jokes (the hamster) that he simply couldn't be imagined by anyone that didn't already know him.

As for you, I wouldn't have dreamt there was someone who saw so much in such quick snatches and then managed to have the talent to write about it so well. My day is always better when I find a new post from you.

Spence said...

Thanks v much, PT1!

Of course, Frank is about as real as you can get. His patter, too. I suppose everyone in the ambulance develops their own little bits of business, the schtick they use in various ways to diffuse situations or get patients on their side. I love Frank's shoe salesman thing - it's warm and strangely disarming! (I think he nicked it off 'Spinal Tap') :)

papertigger1 said...

Spinal Tap seems like a particularly appropriate place for you guys to borrow from! If my neurologist tries it however, I'm going to be worried. Few things ruin your week faster than a spinal tap headache!

Spence said...

PT1 - I mean 'This is Spinal Tap' (the film) - a classic comedy rockumentary about a British heavy metal band :)

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0088258/

It's one of those films you could quote from all day...